Hi Bob,

Here is what I got from your letter:

1) Rod Fleck was acting as an auctioneer at this charity auction, and during the time he was on the podium he made a few snide comments directed solely towards you and Fish-Gal. These comments were RE: your position on the CnR rules.

2) Because of his comments you and Fish Gal left the auction, and are pulling all of your support for that charity.

3) Confusing to a reader - The auction appears to have been on Sat. eve., but now it is Sunday (when you wrote the letter) and your pulling your support...but weren't your items donated (clams, guided trips) sold at the auction Sat. night? (Sounds confusing to me...Is it a 2 day affair and your items have not been brought to the bidders yet?)

Suggestion? If it hasn't already been sent, you might shorted it up a bit..people don't generally read that long of a letter carefully..instead they read the first paragraph then scan the balance for relevant info..perhaps missing important points.

What kind of reaction/response are you expecting/desiring from him, or the City of Forks?

Overall very well written, and well stated..but were it me (and its not) I would have shortened it and been more direct to the point..IE: Bullet points noting the reasons why you pulled your support.

My 2 centavos...

Mike B