There presently is some sort of "kids first" type of program going on in this area right now. Possibly it is going on in many areas, I don't know, but the promo lines go like this: "Our kids....Our business....Start the conversation." Then across the bottom of the card reads: "Healthy Kids, Healthy Families, Healthy Community" There are colorful pinwheels involved as well.

Pretty cool, huh?

So why is it that it reads to me like this: "Your kids, Our business, Start the conversion" ????

I'm thinking that replacing the word "Business" with "Responsibility" would be a better choice.

I know the intention is good....Hell, probably better than good, but to me it feels like one more busy-body with nothing better to do than mind everyone else's business tapping me on the shoulder and saying, "You can't do that."

Thoughts?