I'm with Steve. Hey RT, when did dough-nuts and cheese contain fiber??? :p

There were fragments, run-ons, and the tenses of the verbs didn't conjoin.

Now they do.

It's still your paper Jr. All I did was re-word it where needed, and set verbs straight, and helped the paper flow better. No ideas or thoughts were removed. I almosted put in the porn urls, but if your professor is kewl, he already has them.