Jackie,

Never hurts to put thoughts into words. The spelling is atrocious, to be honest, but it is understandable. Way too many adjectives, also. You can paint a picture with words, but you need a "softer brush"..

Run it through a spell-check next time, and then try to put it into a more readable format.

BTW, who gives a [censored] if anyone likes it...it's your work, so enjoy it as it is.

Mike